Why was the night getting darker and her thoughts even deadlier?


I am an observant writer and motivational blogger. My blog is the true reflection of my soul. It spreads happiness and shows ways to smile even when time tests you. Organising effectively and managing time makes me productive. Over the years, I have become calm. I am clear of my goal and this makes my journey smooth. Currently, the focus is to win anger and use the power of the subconscious mind to control my brain.

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20 Responses

  1. Oh my twist!! Love it absolutely. Was having chills while reading. Love the story line

  2. Wow I was not expecting that gruesome end to the story! Very gripping!

  3. Neha Tambe says:

    Woah.. I didn’t expect it to end like this. Playing with someone’s emotions for proving a point is just beyond me.

  4. MeenalSonal says:

    The story had love, drama and revenge, good packaged story for all of us. That’s an awesome take on the prompt Geethica. And liked the subtitles in the story that are like chapter headings in the book.

  5. Anita Sabat says:

    Well presented, Geethica.
    Sad that Rahul had to suffer this way. Always bad when people play with feelings.
    He took his revenge & went back to his shop, but the event will haunt him.
    The law will take its own course.

  6. What an interesting twisted tale… Loved it

  7. Zenobia Merchant says:

    Wow! Lovely tale with a twist. Taut narration.

  8. Sonia dogra says:

    Interesting tale of revenge.

  9. Neha Jain says:

    Wow! what an end. I never expected it this way. You have given this story a nice closure. I liked the way you have written this story.

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