Way to Eternity
Gasping for her breath, Mahalakshmi fell down on earth. Her throat was dry since ages and there was not even a sign of moisture in the winds around. Now there is no strength left in me, she looked up. How will I reach there? She questioned herself.
Looked at the gate up there; through the smoke engulfing the area; the stairs reaching there and there she could see something. She could see someone; a figure. She could feel the aura; she could see Lord Shiva.
She got up at once; made an attempt to jump high; high in the air. Reached up.
And vanished into air.
Linking this post with Shailaja V and Shilpa Garg for #BarWoWe
I just randomly picked this piece to read and Woah! I’m glad I stumbled upon it because this is amazing storytelling on a picture prompt.I wasn’t expecting that take but that’s what creativity is all about. Beautifully penned tale. 🙂
Thank you Saumy. This comment is a real appreciation for me as fiction doesn’t come to me easily.
Very well written!!!
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This was very interesting.Definitely shiver down spine type reading.Good job on the prompt
Thanks a lot Amrita. I have tried writing this for the first time. I am thankful you liked it
Right in time for Shivraatiri! Good one.
thanks a lot for reading.